tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3692691111107336894.post3780098412023676261..comments2010-10-04T09:16:51.803-07:00Comments on Cathryn McCarthy: You insufferable man!Cathryn McCarthyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05356312574384133315noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3692691111107336894.post-48833085713993968062010-10-04T09:16:51.803-07:002010-10-04T09:16:51.803-07:00Thank you so much - and sorry ity took me a while ...Thank you so much - and sorry ity took me a while to get back to this comment. I've been a bit waylaid over the last week - really must update here :D<br /><br />*g*! So glad you thought Robert was hot. I had a lot of fun writing him and, um, this morning I wrote the love scene (chapter 13!!!) I will definitely make sure people can read more soon - thank you!Cathryn McCarthyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05356312574384133315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3692691111107336894.post-39120805425496112772010-09-30T13:52:57.971-07:002010-09-30T13:52:57.971-07:00Hi Cathryn, you know I loved your chapter which ma...Hi Cathryn, you know I loved your chapter which makes it really hard to actually crit it. It really felt like a breath of original fresh air in the comp and how it was overlooked I do not know. And I speak as one of the guilty parties submitting society tales full of rakes and debutantes never thinking outside the convention of the ton.<br />Like Sophia I did pick up on a hint of arrogance and rivalry in your hero plus I thought he was HOT. Absolutely keep on with this, obviously I can only critique chapter 1 but it absolutely hooked me and I really want to keep reading (please)!Jessica Gilmore https://www.blogger.com/profile/11315382943510090477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3692691111107336894.post-51729933453897698522010-09-24T07:46:11.665-07:002010-09-24T07:46:11.665-07:00Sophia - thank you so much! I'm glad it came a...Sophia - thank you so much! I'm glad it came across, it was supposed to be only hinted at in chapter one...but it was only after posting I thought 'maybe this isn't the moment to be subtle about these things!!' Your kind words make me feel so much better though - and I felt the same about your story. I loved the setting very much indeed and was completely pulled in and definitely wanted more (and not just because I'm a huuuuuuuuuuge fan of Roman fic :))Cathryn McCarthyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05356312574384133315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3692691111107336894.post-11928568014963096322010-09-24T05:04:13.701-07:002010-09-24T05:04:13.701-07:00Hi Cathryn, having read, and immensely enjoyed you...Hi Cathryn, having read, and immensely enjoyed your chapter, I can say I did pick up on the paragraph you mention. It stood out actually and when she accuses him of worrying about his rival, you think, "ah, yes, I bet he IS thinking that!" I'd have to read again to see if I thought there should be a tad more conflict, but on the first reading, that thought certainly didn't cross my mind. I was just thinking, this is a damn good story and I want to know what happens next! HTH.Sophia Harrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16088931733851729692noreply@blogger.com